So I put my Over the Rainbow through a sequencer and it sounds a lot better. I transposed it down a couple of keys and put in some reverb and stuff. Then did some more editing in Sibelius, lkike articulations and stuff cause it sounded all mushy. But the end product is a LOT better than the last submission I made.
For comparison purposes:
The new one
versus
The old one

Check them both out, and please rate and comment :D

Thanks! Al